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Please help me edit this! I am a female and please help me make sure I use the right tense!

Please help me edit this! I am a female and please help me make sure I use the right-example-1
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In my opinion I think it’s correct
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Looks good! It seems to be in the right tense and I didn't notice any gender mistakes
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