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Assess the following statements and select the sample that illustrates an editing error.

A. Phoenix is an ideal place to live in the winter.

B. We have many favorite foods. Among the best are: pizza, wings and strawberries.

C. The best summer days are spent playing on the beach at the shore.

D. Lily was disappointed by the team's defeat. They think a better defense would have won the game.

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Answer:

B. We have many favorite foods. Among the best are: pizza, wings and strawberries.

Step-by-step explanation:

The colon is unnecessary.

And, although the instructions ask for only one answer, I should point out that a beach and a shore are pretty much the same thing, so you could argue that using both words is redundant.

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