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Identify the problem with the following topic sentence.

A vacation in the Pocono Mountains is great.



B.

The topic does not interest many people.

C.

The sentence needs to make a point about the topic.


Think about what the writer wants to tell the audience about the Poconos. Look for a choice that explains why the sentence fails to do this.

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C. Gives a reason or a point why pocono mountains is good
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c.

Explanation: all sentences need to make a point that atleast relate a little

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