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Why should teensagers play dangerous sports? Well the reason why they should is because it's healthy for you and helps you build teamwork.

Playing in dangerous sports relly isnt as bad as you might think. There is alot of good things about sports. For example, Football. Football is a game where you have to get the ball to the goal, there is alot moe about the game but it is mostly running, kicking, and shoving. All three of these things are heathly for you because running builds up the strenghth in your legs and kicking does as well, and shoving builds strenghth in your arms. When your running and you have to get through two guys that are bigger than you strenghth and speed will come in handy.

Another reason why teens should play dangerous sports is because, teamwork. Teamwork is very useful in life because all jobs use teamwork. people that are docters have to work together to make sure the patient gets better, buisnesses have to work together to make good product and eye catching photographs to have people buy their product. All of this wouldn't get done without teamwork. When your playing a sport you need to use teamwork to win. If you dont and and be greedy and think its all about you, you'll most likely ruin the game for your team.

So these are the reasons why teenagers should play dangerous sports, it's healthy for you and helps you build teamwork.

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Answer: Go back through and check your spelling and grammar.

Explanation: I saw relly(really), isnt (isn’t)

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