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How can you revise this paragraph to expand the variety of sentence

patterns? The woman was old and ugly. Her hair was short and gray.
She walked with a walker and cane.
Select one:

Start each sentence differently.

End some sentences differently,

Include more details about the woman

Use the woman's name.

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Answer:

You can end some sentences differently.

Step-by-step explanation:

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