Answer:
Sorry we can't answer since we didn't read the story but i wiil give u the rules that can help u
First-person point of view : when writer uses in the story pronouns like: I, me, myself,we, us, or ourselves... (writer talking about himself)
Second-person point of view: when writer uses in the story pronouns like: YOU, YOUR, YOURSELF... (writer talking about you, the reader)
Third-person point of view: when writer uses in the story pronouns like: He, She, They, It, his, him, her ,their, himself, herself, itself, themselves.... (writer talking about any person but not present)
Hoped i benefit u...