Question

Fix each email to sound more formal. Tell what is wrong with it and how you are going to improve it. Remember these are student to teacher emails.

Answer 1

hope this helps :)

Step-by-step explanation:

1.

There is no subject, you shouldn't be calling your teacher by their first name either. This version would be more appropriate.

Subject: (Class name/block + students name + 'Extra Credit')

Dear Ms/Mrs. Kruse,

I was wondering if there was any extra credit available for your ___ block. I turned in an assignment from last month already, since I'm trying to get my grades up.

Thanks,

Steve (last initial/name)

2.

The email does not contain any exact point, the first paragraph contains nothing for Mrs. Lorenzo regarding Kevin's grade, and Kevin's entire message is not how you should speak to someone.

Subject: (Block/class + student name + 'My grade(s)')

Dear Mrs. Lorrenzo,

I was looking online, and I just wanted to confirm that I got the right marks on ______. Since I wasn't sure what I got wrong.

Thanks and have a good day!

Kevin Pepper

3.

There is no proper capitalization or right grammar

Hello Mr. Unes,

I am in your 3rd-hour class and am unable to make it to class September 1-5 due to a family situation. I was wondering if there's any way to get my work in advance to keep up to date with class. Also, I would be more than willing to complete any extra credit you have available. I wanted to try and get my grade up.

Thanks,

Jessica L.