Question

Directions: Take 2 minutes to work with a shoulder partner and determine if the following introductions are weak or strong. Be sure to explain WHY!

Workin part-time as a cashier at the Pily Wily has iven me a reat opportunity to observe human
behavior. Sometimes I think o the shoppers as white rats in a lab experiment, and the aisles as a maze
desined by a psycholoist. Most o the rats—customers, I mean—ollow a routine pattern, strollin up
and down the aisles, checkin throuh my chute, and then escapin throuh the exit hatch. But not
everyone is so dependable.

Answer 1

These instructions are weak.

Step-by-step explanation:

The given instructions do not have a sequence or set steps to follow. It does not even really explain what the narrator of the instructions is trying to do. It looks more like a paragraph from a novel than a list of instructions; its informal language and discussed behavior seem more like a person's inner thoughts.