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A man lived in a farmhouse he was old he lived alone the house was on a mountain the mountain was high the house was on top he grew vegetables he grew grain he ate the vegetables he ate the grain one day he was pulling weeds he saw something a chicken was eating his grain. The grain was new he caught the chicken he saw an egg the chicken cackled the man thought something he would eat the egg for breakfast. He fed the chicken a cup of grain the chicken talked to him he talked to the chicken time passed he thought something he could feed the chicken more he could feed her two cups of grain he could feed her in the morning. He could feed her at night maybe she would lay two eggs every morning. He fed the chicken more grain she got fat she got lazy she slept all the time she laid no eggs the man got angry he blamed the chicken he killed her he ate her for breakfast he had no chicken he had no eggs he talked to no one no one talked to him.

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