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What would be an effective claim for this speech?

It's lame when kids get stuck in their desk day after day,
just doing the same old school routine.
Once I went to the aquarium with my grandparents, and
I saw hammerhead sharks, sting rays, and giant sea
turtles.
Local museums, parks, and businesses offer low-cost
learning experiences that connect students to the
community.
If students visit local fire departments, they are likely to
decide to become firefighters.

User Ezennnn
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Answer: The answer would be; If students visit local fire departments, they are likely to decide to become firefighters.

Explanation: Well all the other claims of the paragraph just throws out an opinion that isn't backed up or makes a claim at all. The last sentence would be the right answer because its states a claim relevant to its topic

User Garreth
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Answer:

C. Local museums, parks, and businesses offer low-cost learning experiences that connect students to the community.

Step-by-step explanation:

A. It sounds more like a hook and doesn't get the point across.

B. Personal experiences shouldn't be in good claims.

C. It talks about the variety of field-trips and the benefit to the children.

D. It's only focusing on one area. (off topic)

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