Question

Your co-worker has asked you for feedback on a department memo she has written. Help your co-worker revise her memo by identifying and describing three (3) things that could be improved. If you haven't had the chance yet, make sure you congratulate Laura on her promotion to Records Specialist. Laura worked as a department clerk for several years before deciding to return to school. She completed her degree in Health Information Technology last month, just in time to apply for the Records Specialist position. Laura's new manager is impressed with her performance so far. By the way, Laura's birthday is next week too! Good job, Laura, and keep up the good work.

Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

After a careful consideration, the memo is good enough but need some of initial mistakes to be corrected, while revising the Memo I identify three things that shouldn't be improve. See below:

● The main reason for writing the memo.

● The audience for the memo.

● The objective tone.

Hope this helps you out. Looking forward for the good one.