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Read this paragraph and answer the question that follows,

(1) My oldest cousin, Lea, lives on a ranch. (2) I love visiting hert (3) One of the most fabulous things about her life is
that she's around horses every day! (4) Frequent contact with horses is believed to improve a person's mood and
mental state. (5) I love horses, and I'm not kidding when I say that I would live Lea's life in a minute.
Which sentence should be revised because it does not maintain the style and tone of the rest of the paragraph?
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4
sentence 5

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The answer is sentence 4
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