Question

is my English correct? '' A caring, kind pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks. This furry cat is well-behaved and will rub against your legs with its cream-tipped tail. Its food and bed will be provided.'' ​

Answer 1

A caring, kind pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks. This furry cat is well-behaved and will rub against your legs with its cream-tipped tail. Its food and bed will be provided.

Step-by-step explanation:

I think it's good it doesn't need anything but if you want instead of the comma after caring you can just say A caring and kind.............

or instead of care you can say look after

so A caring and kind pet lover is wanted to look after ......

Answer 2

A caring, kind pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks. This furry cat is well-behaved and will rub against your legs with its cream-tipped tail. Its food and bed will be provided.

Step-by-step explanation:

'Caring' and 'kind' mean the same thing, so using both words is redundant.

To use the infinitive 'to care' is also redundant if you use the word 'care.'

If a person is 'kind,' then he/she loves all people and animals, so that is redundant.

A pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks.

A pet lover is wanted to look after my cat while I'm away for two weeks.