Question

In four to five sentences, summarize an important day in your life. Use at least one simple sentence, one compound sentence, one complex sentence, and one compound-complex sentence in your writing. Below is what I have written I just need some help if I can use this paragraph.

I was so excited to go to a video game store. My parents decided to get me my own Nintendo switch. My sister and I were always arguing over who's turn it was. I am now overjoyed that I have my own, and now my sister and I can play together with two different consoles.

Answer 1

Monday was a day unlike any other. When I woke up, I noticed immediately that I could not see any part of my body. Naturally, I panicked and ran to the bathroom to look at a mirror, but there was nothing to see because I hadn't turned on any lights yet. I flipped the light switch, and there I saw my ugly reflection in the mirror. Uggh!

Step-by-step explanation:

I was so excited to go to a video game store. simple

My parents decided to get me my own Nintendo switch. simple

My sister and I were always arguing over who's turn it was. simple

I am now overjoyed that I have my own, and now my sister and I can play together with two different consoles. compound

BTW ... The word you want is 'whose,' not 'who's.'