Question

The Last Supper (which was painted in the 1490s) and the Mona Lisa of the 1500s are da Vinci's most famous paintings.

Which type of sentence error is contained in the above sentence: conciseness, order, or variety? Give your answer and rewrite the sentence to improve its effectiveness.

Answer 1

conciseness

Two of da Vinci's most famous paintings are the Last Supper, painted in the 1490s, and the Mona Lisa painted in the 1500s.

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