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Rewrite the following sentence to show instead of tell.


Horatio was furious.

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Answer:

Horatio was red in the face and shaking. Horatio's eyes were low and squinting. Horatio's were firmly clenched into a fist.

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You describe what anger typically looks like on a person instead of stating the emotion they were feeling. Any of the above would work.

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Answer:

Horatio clenched his fists in rage.

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