Question

Ariana is the editor of an online literary magazine for teens. She likes the story that one of her authors submitted, but she thinks the author should revise the following section to better develop the characters.

Crash! Marvin jumped at the sound of shattering glass. Instinctively crouching to protect himself, he spotted Clarissa behind the couch. Marvin demanded to know what was going on, but despite Clarissa’s efforts to speak, she couldn’t utter a word.

How can the author revise this section to reveal more about the character Marvin?

A.
Add descriptions to show what Marvin looks like.
B.
Add information to show how Marvin feels about Clarissa.
C.
Add dialogue to show what Marvin said to Clarissa and how he said it.
D.
Add information that reveals Marvin’s thoughts as he hears the glass break.

Answer 1

I think the answer would be c!

Answer 2

I think it should be answer C: Add information to show how Marvin feels about Clarissa.

Step-by-step explanation:

The character might already be drawn, and knowing someone psycologically is more important.

The dialogue couldn't be more explanatory.

Marvin's thoughts aren't as important as the way he behaves, as his personality.