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Molly is revising her narrative, a science fiction story about a disaster on a space station. This is her opening paragraph.

Sheba settled into her pod and clicked the safety belts into place. A gentle hum announced the closing of the pod door. Sheba closed her eyes and let herself drift to sleep. When she awoke, the ship would be at its destination, the Mars XIV outpost, and the great adventure she’d been dreaming about for a decade would finally begin.

How can Molly revise her narrative to better engage the reader?

A.
She can add more events to the rising action to build suspense before revealing the climax of the story.
B.
She can add more details about the spaceship to make sure readers know the story takes place in the future.
C.
She can change the narrator from third-person limited to third-person omniscient so the reader learns more about the other characters in the story.
D.
She can begin with the climax of the story, an explosion on the space station, to draw in the reader and then use flashbacks to explain the events that led to the explosion.

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Answer:

yep its D

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i took the test :3

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d

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