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Read the sentence.

Diego shook his head when he saw the litter on the ground.

Which revision should the writer make to emphasize how Diego was feeling?

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Diego shook his head when he saw the litter on the ground. He said to himself "Do I have a choice to clean this up? I don't think so", he started cleaning the litter.
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Answer:

Diego shook his head when he saw the litter on the ground, and he quickly began picking it up.

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hope this helps:))

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