We saw some perky brown ducks, saw some bright silver fish, and then went for a leisurely stroll. Which changes should the writer make to improve the word choices in this sentence without including too

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We saw some perky brown ducks, saw some bright silver fish, and then went for a leisurely stroll. Which changes should the writer make to improve the word choices in this sentence without including too much detail? Add descriptive details about the ducks, the fish, and the walk. Explain what the ducks and fish were doing. Replace the verbs with vivid verbs. Replace the nouns with more precise nouns.