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PLEASE HELP. thanks in advance:)

can someone write me a short, but not too short concrete poem about ice cream?

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Answer:

As the summer sun beamed down on me

I sat in defeat against it.

With one last salvation sitting in my hand

The solid form stared at me, melting.

Giving me one last chance.

As if I had been struck

It saved me from the exhausting light.

Step-by-step explanation:

I don't know if this was the type of poem you were going for or not but feel free to change it around and all that :)

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Ice cream Ice cream, in a bowl. Ice cream Ice cream, nice and cold. Ice cream Ice cream, what a treat! Ice cream Ice cream, so good to eat!
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