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Paul wanted to save up money to go to prom this year he got a part-time job at the local mall

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Answer: Paul wanted to save up money to go to prom this year. He got a part-time job at the local mall.

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Answer:

Paul wanted to save up money to go to prom. This year he got a part-time job at the local mall.

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