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Read the sentence.

After spending years of time conducting research to look for information, the scientist finally made a discovery that would solve a problem once and for all.


Which revision most effectively shortens the sentence to make it less repetitive and more precise?


1. The scientist conducted research to find information and discovered a solution to a problem he wanted to solve


2. The scientist spent a long time looking for research information and made an important discovery.


3. After years of research, the scientist discovered a cure for the rare disease.

This is sadly the end of my 3 question streak. D:

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It’s 1 because I said so just trust me ik
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