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Identify which sentence is the better thesis statement.

Select one:
a. The new product brought in over $300,000 last year.
b. This new product succeeded because of its innovative markeying campaign, including widespread press coverage, in-store entertainment, and a consumer newsletter.

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Answer:

b. This new product succeeded because of its innovative markeying campaign, including widespread press coverage, in-store entertainment, and a consumer newsletter.

Step-by-step explanation:

more detail and explanation, and lays out what the essay is going to be about

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