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Which of the following sentences is the most clear and effective?

A.
Quieter and stronger than zippers and Velcro, Leonard Duffy has invented a new type of fastener.
B.
A new type of fastener has been invented to create a quieter and stronger fastener than zipper and Velcro.
C.
To create a quieter and stronger fastener than zipper and Velcro, a new type of fastener has been invented.
D.
Leonard Duffy has invented a new type of fastener that is quieter and stronger than zippers and Velcro.

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D. Leonard Duffy has invented a new type of fastener that is quieter and stronger than zippers and velcro.

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D is the most clear and effective, in my opinion.

A doesn’t make sense. B seems to be repeating itself. C doesn’t make sense either.