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Which example of peer feedback for a work of narrative fiction is most

effective?
O A. You made the wrong choice by writhig science fiction, which is the
least literary of all
genres.
B. Although you wrote about war, I would have preferred a story
about mischievous students.
C. It was difficult for me to understand what motivated your
character. What does she want?
D. While aspects of the story are good, the writing is bad and needs
to be improved somehow,

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C would be the best choice as they’re being kind about it and asking questions to further figure out the point of the story. All other answers are opinionated & a little too upfront and rude
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