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Adventure of my life

Weekends are always busy, especially for people like me. I'm Janet and I work part time as a waitress at the Downtown diner a few blocks away from school. I live in a crowded city, full of lively people who always have plans of some sort. I live with my older brother Chase, and single mother Kendra. My parents split up when I was a baby so I never really knew who or what my father was. Anyways, we live in an apartment down the street from where I work. Currently I am a senior in highschool and a graphic designer in training, although I am hoping for that to change. I look forward to having a career that will keep me interested and alive rather than working a job that will slowly drive me insane.
“Finally!..., it is finally Friday.” I always look forward to Fridays since it’s the last day before I get a break from homework, assignments, teachers, etc. I get to look forward to my job and have the rest of the afternoons to myself.
I get up already running late for school. I get ready and decide I’ll grab breakfast from the diner on my way. I grabbed the keys and hurried towards the door when suddenly my mom started calling my name. Turning back I see her speeding down the stairs with a letter in her hand. Then, handing it to me she told me to slip it into the dropbox around the corner when I get the chance. Myself being in a hurry I sighed and answered in an ok and headed out the door not thinking anything of it.
I started walking to school. I saw some of my neighbors walking around the neighborhood, then I took out my airpods and my phone from my backpack. I listened to music while walking in a nice,quiet environment. Later I felt like someone was following me from behind me so I just tried to be normal and calm so the guy doesn’t think that I know what he’s doing so I lower my volume down. I started walking a bit faster, he was still coming closer to me then I looked at the time on my phone. I had five minutes less time to be in class. I thought about going to the building next to my school, I went in, went to the restroom texting my brother saying where are you? He said at home why? Can you pick me up. So then I showed my location where I was. So I waited until my brother came and he came into the building….


I came out from the restroom and ran as quickly as possible. I brother

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Answer:

you should add something like (the same guy that was following me) and add what else you want

Step-by-step explanation:

it adds readers to be questioning you about what's going to happen next

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