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A movie that impacts my emotional growth is the Disney Pixar movie Up. This movie impacts my emotional growth because it teaches about moving on from loss, making new memories, having good relationships with people, and realizing that life isn’t perfect, and we should make the most of it. In this movie, Carl was sad about his wife’s death, but Russell helps him to move on from that loss and they make new memories together. Also, they become like a family with Carl, Russell, and Dug. Carl finally becomes happy again with the new company...

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Yes agreed, very well thought out! Great work
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I think its really good! It's a good length, and it sounds like you're speaking from your heart. I would give it an A!

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