Question

Came someone help me revise it:

Write your Basic Thesis Statement in the space below.
Marther Lurther King Jr. uses metaphors and analogies in his letter to appeal to the spectators from an emotional point of view and persuade his audience to join his anti racist movement.

Go through the Thesis Statement Essentials Checklist. It is okay if you are not able to check off some of these characteristics.


Is your thesis statement one sentence? YES
Does it answer the question? YES
Does it use specific words? YES
Does it take a stand? Could someone have a different interpretation? NO
Does it answer “Why does this matter?” or “So what?” YES
Based on the checklist above, revise your thesis statement so that it has all of the above qualities and include it here.

Answer 1

Marther Lurther King, Jr. uses metaphors and analogies in his letter to appeal to the spectators from an emotional point of view, and to persuade his audience to join his movement against segregation.

Just a couple of grammar fixes.