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Is this paragraph grammatically correct?

One of my favorite movies is 50 first dates, I never get tired of watched it. It is a really
funny and interesting movie, especially because was filmed in Hawaii, a country that some day I would like to go.

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Answer: No, not exactly.

Explanation: You could reformat it like so:

One of my favorite movies is 50 First Dates; I never get tired of watching it. It is a really funny and interesting movie, especially because it was filmed in Hawaii, a country I would someday like to go to.

Grammar Notes:

- You need to italicize and properly capitalize movie titles (like 50 First Dates).

- Independent clauses should be joined with a semicolon (like in the first sentence).

- Always include direct objects (you forgot the it before was in the second sentence).

User Insomaniacal
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U missed the “it” in the middle of because and was
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