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There's a hook sentence?:

I knew that in a few weeks I should start school. At this moment I realized that one of my goals had been met. With a little nervousness and few words coming out of my mouth, not knowing what to expect next. I remembered when I entered first grade of high school.​

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Answer:

This one is strange. A hook sentence is usually the first line. If you need to write a hook, I can do that too

Step-by-step explanation:

For the hook I suggest saying something like..

I stopped cold where I stood, I only have a couple weeks left!

That would help draw attention to the writing

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