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Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

Rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling. (15 points)
Nathan listened to music.

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Nathan’s ears embraced the smooth rhythm that soared throughout his baby blue tinted vinyl record player.
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