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Can someone please fix and explain grammar errors I am not sure what I missed thx :)

The mental disorder I have chosen is depression. The reason that I chose this disorder is that it is so common, yet not everyone knows the symptoms or gets proper treatment for it. Medication such as Prestic and Khedezla are serotonin-norepinephrine reuptake inhibitors which are newer medications than selective serotonin reuptake inhibitors. These medications increase the amount of serotonin our body produces which increases how good we feel. Some of the benefits of taking this medication are that your depression is lessened or even eventually gone. the mood changes will be that our happier and less anxious. Common side effects of SNRIs are nausea, dry mouth, dizziness, headaches, and excessive sweating.

I think people often avoid telling people of depression can vary from many different reasons; like they don't feel like they would be treated differently or people worry bout them, another reason may be that since society has an impression of that having depression means you are weak or you have nothing to be sad about. I do not believe that all these people are trying to be mean but instead, I think it is ignorance, I think this because people don't always educate themselves properly they go by what someone has told them in a movie instead of going online and looking at the facts such as It's not the person's fault that they feel this way I could be chemical imbalance like low serotonin. This simple fact of false information is an easy fix with either a simple google search or people raise awareness of it so people don't feel like they are alone. According to healthline.com 16.2 million people in the U.S alone have a depressive episode a year!

Answer 1

Hi!

You missed these few things...

You wrote, "Some of the benefits of taking this medication are that your depression is lessened or even eventually gone"

I would write, One of the many benefits of taking this medication is that your depression is lessened of even eventually gone.

You also wrote, "the mood changes"

You should capitalize the "T" in the word "The" because you started a new sentence.

You wrote, "the mood changes will be that our happier and less anxious"

I would write, You will experience happier and less anxious moods.

Now for the second paragraph you wrote, "I think people often avoid telling people of depression can vary from many different reasons"

I would write, I think people suffering with depression often avoid telling people of their depression because

"I could be chemical imbalance like low serotonin."

It could be chemical imbalance

"simple google search or people raise awareness"

Capitalize the "G" in the word "Google"