Question

Is this thesis statement grammatically correct? Does it flow well? Correct it if not please.

Despite the slum being constantly saturated with violence, the most meaningful theme in “La Limonada” is hope, because it continued to motivate Jonathan Orozco during painful and dark times and the love from his mother sustained his hope.

Answer 1

Everything is correct in the thesis statement with well written topics. You did a really good job on also making it informational. This also helps you do well in the writing process for your assignment. Good Job! :)