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What would be a better way to write the sentence to make the language more

appropriate for a formal essay?
OA. Let's say, a museum that houses antiques from the American Revolution
can enable the students to imagine and help keep their creative juices
flowing
OB. Consider another example: a visit to the museum that houses antiques
from the American Revolution can stimulate creativity and help students
visualize the past
Oc. For instance, a museum that contains antiques from the American
Revolution can help students summon up a lifelike image of the times in
their minds

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B.
It gives better detail and explains how it would help the students.
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