Question

The novel Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen is a classic because its message is enduring. The novel has similarities to her other works, but its theme is altogether different. The novel examines the pitfalls of preconceived biases and their consequences. The novel has had a number of adaptations, theatrical renditions, and sequels, but the theme of the novel is always the same. What is the best way to revise this paragraph?

Answer 1

The beginnings of the sentences need to be varied.

Step-by-step explanation:

As per the question, the most appropriate way to revise the given paragraph would be to 'vary the beginnings of the sentences' as the use of similar subject/noun 'The novel' to begin the sentences offers a monotonous tone that is affecting the overall coherence and meaning of the paragraph. To rectify this error, the sentences could be begun with different parts of speech which would not only help provide variety in the paragraph and break the monotony but also provide a smooth flow of ideas and engages the readers' interest and attention. Thus, the 'beginnings need to be varied.'