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Which is the best sentence to revise to replace vague language? sentence 1 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 4

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Answer:Answer is C Edg 2023

Explanation:Read the body paragraph from a personal statement.(1) Since I live in the Midwest, my fascination with the ocean might seem unusual. (2) I have my aunt to thank for sparking my interest in marine biology. (3) My family’s annual visits to her home are always great. (4) We visit the local beaches to study shells, seaweed, and ocean dwellers like crabs, clams, and jellyfish.Which is the best sentence to revise to replace vague language?sentence 1sentence 2sentence 3sentence 4

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There is not a valid answer choice, but go with sentence 3 because C is always right
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