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A wind older than the mountain

she's stronger than a giant
she's like a soft fountain
though I wish she'd be quiet

the wind eats me away
she's the key to my heart
should she savor the stay?
or should she depart?

her smile is my kryptonite
pitter-patter as she moves
will she be here tonight?
but sadly my heart disapproves.

Where’s the metaphor?

User Oyophant
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Its “her smile is my kryptonite”
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