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How would you revise a paragraph to increase the pace of the story?

How would you revise a paragraph to increase the pace of the story?
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How would you revise a paragraph to increase the pace of the story?

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Answer:Shorter but fluid sentences that don’t have unnecessary conjunctions.

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