Question

OK hi i wrote a poem can you tell me if its good or scary thank you its for school.

Roses are red violets are blue and now i will be doing a poem on this i will do.
When the time is wrong but never right. when i see you at night the trees light up the night. Do not run Do not cry Dont you even dare to cry. i will find you i am the monster that hunts you at night. I lerk beneath where you sleep i am the fears you have at night i am always on your mind. i am the fear or your worst nightmare. You can run and hide but i will try! So keep running little ones. I will be there at night. Those shallow screams you hear at times or the screams for help there just a lie i am coming to get you oh how i am like a stalker that is never there and when Darkness holds me back as I creep through the day but when it comes to night just you wait For now hide till then have a good night.

Answer 1

It's good, to make it better, two things I would reccomend are adding commas in some spots as well as removing any capitalized text that comes before a punctuation.

Answer 2

its good but you could fix some like " i am like a stalker that is never there" he is always there buts you cant see him.

Step-by-step explanation:

also just check pucuation