Judy asked Sarah to help her revise the following paragraph. Identify the correct example of revising.
Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark have made no sales and begin to worry if their business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase all the supplies needed to begin their first week .. After a little advertisng and free samples , the shop is doing much better.
A. Sarah corrects the spelling of coffee in the first sentence
B. Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly
C. Sarah adds a period between the words one and with
D. Sarah corrects the punctuation of elm street