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Narrative essay writing

Write a story based on the following sentence :
"The moment i stepped in the house, I immediately felt that something was amiss. "

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The moment I stepped into the house, I immediately felt that somthing was amiss. Everything was too quiet my loud siblings nowhere in sight. I could understand why my motherwas missing, she was at work but I had two loud siblings which meant i always came home to a messy house and loud arguments. Now that I thought of it something didn't smell right either. The smell of somthing rotten was floating in theair and the farther I stepped into the house the stronger it got.

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I can't write you a whole sorry unfortunately but I hope you can work with this.

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