Question

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Evaluate this thesis statement and identify if it is well constructed and why. If no, explain what is missing.
Katniss everdeen is a compassionate and selfless character who motivates a people to rise up and challenge the confines of their corrupt government

Answer 1

Answer: “who motivates (a) people”

rewrite this as “who motivated people”

Step-by-step explanation:

It’s a simple grammatical error

Answer 2

I think it is well constructed. But you could write it this way:

"Katniss Everdeen is a compassionate, selfless character who motivates people to rise up and dare to challenge the confines of their government"

Step-by-step explanation:

It's pretty much the same, yes, you're thesis is well constructed and really didn't need much changed. I simply added a few extra words.