Question

Heugenogs are so cute. I

love looking at pictures of
them! They can carry diseases
that humans can get. They are
nocturnal, so they will be
asleep most of the day. They
also squeak and grunt.
The writer wants to focus on important
facts and details.
YOUR MISSION: Identify the sentences that are inappropriate for this
paragraph.​

Answer 1

At the beginning the H is capital. The construction of the sentences is not correct. I love them, however they can carry diseases.....

If you want to add only facts, maybe personal opinion for example I love them is not necessary.