Question

This is for a rough draft to discribe a time that I felt like I didnt fit in please read it and judge/rate it

Answer 1

Hello! I want to start off by saying: you are not alone. A lot of people, including myself, felt that way during the pandemic. That’s a really great draft! Definitely just check your punctuation as my english teachers have knocked me down at least 2 points per comma missed. Also I would definitely decide on a tone. If you want to sound proper and concise (example) i would rephrase the first sentence as “When the pandemic first started ravaging the globe, I was anxious because _________. The pandemic had taken a toll on me emotionally as i wasn’t as social-“ etc etc

Answer 2

Hey, it's ok! I felt the same when I had to move into online learning in the fifth grade because of cov.id. I couldn't see my friends at all. But then, I realized something. I felt like I just didn't belong in public schools and moved to online learning! I exceeded my teachers' and my parents' expectations! I thought public school was a big ol' drag.

Step-by-step explanation:

I felt the same. I'm glad that I am not alone with this feeling of loneliness.