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Read the sentence.


She likes to go to the beach on the weekends because the beach is where she likes to read.


Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?



On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach and read.


She likes to go to the beach on the weekends because that is the place where she likes to read.


On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach because the beach is where she likes to read.


She likes to go to the beach on the weekends and on the beach is where she likes to read.

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Answer:

On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach because the beach is where she likes to read.

Step-by-step explanation:
i took the quiz

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Answer:

On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach because the beach is where she likes to read.

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Im pretty sure that is right

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