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Which tenant best evaluate the effect of adding dialogue in the second

version of the passage
Page 1
Mom had finally decided to leave me in charge e of my little three year
old brother. As the shut the door behind her, I turned and looked at the
ittle guy standing in front of me. He looked as if he might cry. I thought
a game of hide and seek might help. Hopefully, he wouldn't miss her if
he was having fun
Passage 2
Mom had finally decided to leave me in charge of my little three-year
old brother. As she shut the door behind her, Itured and looked at the
letle guy standing in front of me.
"Momma? Jaxon pointed at the door with his chubby finger Hin
bottom lip started to quiver
"She'll be back soon. Want to play hide-and-seek?
" hidefirat," he cheered as he jumped up and down excitedly. If I could
keep him busy, he wouldn't even think of Mom.
A It makes the passage more interesting by helping the reader
understand Jaxon's emotions
B. It makes the passage more energetic to reflect the fact that both
the narrator and Juxon are moving very quickly.
C. It makes the passage more confusing because it is difficult to
determine who is speaking
D. It makes the passage more suspenseful by showing that the
narrator should not have been left alone with a child.

Which tenant best evaluate the effect of adding dialogue in the second version of-example-1
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Answer:

A. it makes the passage more intresting by helping the reader understand jaxons emotions.

Step-by-step explanation:

Because I said so

User Vishal R
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