Question

The revision of this sentence is clearer and easier to follow for readers: Original: It always amazes me when people get excited about the snow because for me, it’s commonplace. Revision: I am always amazed when people get excited about snow because it is rather commonplace where I live.a.trueb.false

Answer 1

I believe the answer is FALSE.

Step-by-step explanation:

Both sentences are perfectly understandable. There haven't been any changes in the revised version as to make the sentence more succinct or easier. In fact, the use of the passive voice at the beginning and of a more formal grammatical structure overall makes the second sentence a bit less relatable. Therefore, we cannot say the revision made it clearer for readers. The answer is FALSE.