Answer:
Honestly, I think it looks great! And if you keep practicing, I bet you'd be even better.
Step-by-step explanation:
This drawing gives me "mysterious shadow" vibes, which you tend to see a lot in horror artworks. Not to mention the hints of light on the fingers and eyes gives it a nice touch.
I'm not the best at horror art myself, but I think you're headed in the right direction.
:D