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Is there anything wrong with this sentence? The pleasure of all living things in Baldur's presence means the happiness that the sunlight brings; the sorrow of all living things at his death means the gloom of northern countries when winter comes.

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Answer:

not really so no

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I would put it into 2 sentences though

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